I really like the plot of this story, especially bringing Penn in as the insane stalker bad guy. Angelus should have known better than to trust that Penn would never get out, now others are paying for his mistake.
I love all the written images for Spike in this story, especially when Angel is peeping-tom at him when he is modeling, so awesome. I also like the belly piercing, sexy.
I am also loving the Xander-Spike friendship and I hope that gets played up a lot in the rest of the fic too.
It is cool to see Lorne get some center stage in a story too, props to you.
I hope the story is still on the to be written list, I'd love to see it continue. There is room for a lot of confrontation and more Penn creepiness.
Post by .>>JINX<<. on Nov 29, 2011 18:55:09 GMT -5
Stayed tuned, the creepiness REALLY ramps up in the next part of the story, and trust me, NO ONE will see THIS plot twist coming lol. You'll probably have the creeps for DAYS lol.
Respect isn't a commodity of luck in regards to me, show it, or I show you to the door. Do unto others as you will have them do unto you and we'll get along fine. Spike+Angel= Spontaneous Pregnancy so read with caution